Hi guys~ so as you may have already noticed, I have recently uploaded a small portion of the first chapter of my book that im working on, 'The Oleander Project.' With this being my first book, I would very much appreciate my fellow followers to take the time to kindly take a look at it, even if you will only read the summary or 'For the Reader', and leave me feedback on what do you guys think~ whether or not the subject of the story is interesting, or what do you guys think of the style of writing i have chosen so far- ex) word choice, structure, figurative language ect.
Also how do you feel about how the story is developing so far? (Please note that this is barely the first page, which is barely an introduction to one of minor characters on the story)
A personal goal of mine is to become more active and social with my fellow readers/authors~ so please do not be afraid to communicate (:
Thank you very much for your time.
-Kitty Lei
