Bembear

hi pi!  panotice pi ledikeyks

Kiyatehe

@Bembear head, shoulders, knees and toes
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Bembear

@Mitchifuri kay inday ania rako. Atbang, likod, wala, tuo~ ascjfjcjdjdjd
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creatorsahara

Done reading the first 3 chapters, It's a nice story so I added this to my library. 
          
          Very interesting ang story to the point na mapapanext chapter ako. Realistic din ang every scene at hindi masyadong oa unlike sa mga ibang story na nabasa ko, which is good. When it comes to character, ramdam ko yong emotion nila while reading their POV especially sa protagonist which is Addie. Napoportray ng maayos ni author yong personal traits ng every character na hindi nag mimix up.
          
          Maganda ang pagkaka-narrate ng story at good choice of words. When it comes to blurb very interesting and catchy. Sa plot ok rin kasi alam ni readers na may patutunguhan ang story at hindi ililigaw yong kwento. Some story kasi may mga unnecessary scene na inilalagay kahit hindi naman importante. Maayos ding nagagamit ang punctuation mark, actually mas magaling si author sa akin . Pagdating sa grammar no comment ako kasi isa yan sa mga weakness ko . Overall maganda, I know you have a future in writing. If one day you become a famous don't forget me. 
          

Kiyatehe

@creatorsahara thankyousomuch po.❣️ Nakakataba ng puso. Hindi po kita malilimutan, you will be remembered po.
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