Kizzal📿

im writing a khleo Thomas story do u wanna be in it if so text me

Your story the boys next door is a good story but there's some things  that is holding it back from being a great story. For example in chapter three yn pulls out a knife on sammy  doesn't really make sense like where did she get the knife? and why would she have a knife on her? And in the first chapter she just moved in the neighbourhood how could she possibly know where the corner store was located. Iam not trying to bring you down or critize your work but if you listen to me and learn from these things your stories will be awesomely great. 

I wanna write either a book or imagine on here but idk how to start. I also don't mind having someone to help me start off a book if they want. Just say lol

so u like my books huh

thanks for following boo