Kizziiebaby

So this is my first time writing a book. It's not complete nor edited just the first chapter.
          	
          	I'm asking you guys if you could please read the first chapter and give me some feedback if I should continue it not
          	

CamillaOttoni_

A Heart-Stirring Tale of Love, Art, and Redemption
          
          Step into a mesmerizing world where the beauty of art and music meets the raw emotions of love, pride, and family struggles. In this gripping novel, two fiercely talented souls are irresistibly drawn to one another, yet their pride and unresolved pasts keep them apart. Burdened by family trauma, they must face their deepest fears to find healing. Together, they discover that true love isn’t just about desire—it’s about growth, forgiveness, and the courage to move forward.
          
          Join them on an unforgettable journey where art becomes a lifeline, and love is the force that heals even the most broken hearts.
          
          Don’t miss out on this captivating story of passion, resilience, and the transformative power of love.
          
          Read now: https://www.wattpad.com/1471838407?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=CamillaOttoni_
          

PrettyBl0nde

Heyy! If you love Enemies to lovers, mafia romance. You might enjoy this story written by my friend. All support is appreciated!! ❤️ Thank you for your time and I hope you have a great day!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/333744324?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Elisha_Pillayy&wp_originator=C25f3MTasFYmm0BRqgSs2B4I5qFSxb6c91emZuxgNylVWsJDLcbX4gPix8Gq39lv78ZKAZkgi2djazysN2VrgdJC1ywijAGSKxMMieA5yU9G%2FngrLTjZg4eXK4ORoUtg