KizzlaSuzanne475

Why do I image Kirishima From My Hero academia Needing Braces in Middle school? Also wouldn't that be cute? 
          
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Someone want to do a Colorblind Virgil Roleplay with me? I'm just obsessed with it now... Anygay, Let me Know!!! 
          
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THIRD CHAPTER OF THE ELVEN FLOWER IS UP!!!!!! Sorry I haven't posted in a while, I have been busy, and I just wanted to enjoy the break with my Family. I hope you understand, but please enjoy it!!!
          
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HAPPY NEW YEAR'S EVERYONE! To a good an brand new (Hopefully) better year than last.

Hey guys! I just wanted to let you all know that my friend, (Logan) got out of the hospital. She is the one with Leukemia. She is going back to get a transplant soon. I just wanted to give everyone an update! Have a good day.!
          
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Chapter two of The Elven Flower is Up, Go check it out! I am not as proud of it, but I hope you guys can prove me wrong! 
          
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I am here to officially here to announce my Original Story: The Elven Flower! The first Chapter is up and I want everyone to take a look at it and tell me what you think! I am very proud of it and I hope it does my idea justice!
          
          XOXO- KizzilaSuzanne475 

So before I really Post the first Chapter of My book, I kinda want to Introduce the Characters to everyone. 
          
          Rosea Cye Woodrow: One of the two main Characters. Smart, Snarky, and Badass. But does have a soft side for her friends. Bitch slaps Reveat. All. The. Time.
          
          Konnor auh Morrian: The second main Character. A little bit of a bitch, badass, and doesn't take shit. (Nor listen when someone ^^ is right).
          
          Lerin Colston Belca: Konnor's best friend. Often times doesn't get jokes until later. **Very Gay** Cares very much about his friends. Very scared of Rosea.
          
          Noah Xenon Desten: Konnor's other best friend. Tends to get off topic. Will fight anyone who insults Lerin. **Very much has a Crush on Lerin** and wants to Bitch Slap Reveat.
          
          Michelle Sarias Hunopa: Like an older sister to Sam. Has a death stare. One of Rosea's close friends. Will tear your lungs out with her scimitar if you even look at Sam the wrong way. 
          
          Samaire Bethany Norcis: The Shipper. 
          
          Reveat: The Bitch ass you should hate Because she is tryin to steal Rosea's Man.
          
          Nala: Rosea's Best friend. Best line: Fuck you Reveat. 
          
          XOXO- Kizzlasuzanne475

So here is a Sample of a Part of the book, I might later Add if everyone likes the first few. 
          
          Konnor looked over at the brown haired Nature elf. It was funny. When they had first met they had absolutely hated eachother, and now they had traveled to an entirely new world for one another. Konnor managed a small smile, one that made the once prideful and stone faced nature elf to go a slight shade of pink rose. Rosea smiled up at him back, as if she had hoped he didn't see her just blush, she wadded through the slowly rising water in the dark cave they were stuck in. And Rosea moved her hands around Konnor's neck and nuzzled her noes in the crook of his neck. "I love you." She mumbled softly. Her usual dry and rigid tone wasn't heard when she spoke those words. Her voice was soft, smooth, and meaningful. The same tone he used when he first said those words to her. Konnor went a little scarlett and moved his hands around Rosea's back, pulling her into a very tight embrace. "I love you too." 
          
          They stood there for a while, unmoving, unwilling to let go, unwilling to believe that this would be their final moments together. In that moment nothing else mattered except for eachother. The slowly rising water even seemed slower, as if to let the two embrace their final moments together. Rosea looked over and pulled herself away from their tight embrace. "Do you see that ledge over there?" She asked. Konnor squinted and then answered. "You thinking what I'm thinking?" Rosea rolled her eyes but still answered in a playful tone. "If you were to ask me that a couple of years ago I would have said No." Konnor folded his arms and smirked. "So if I asked you to be my wife would you say No?" Rosea leveled his gaze and gave him a light punch. "Ask me that question once we get out of here alive." She said that, then began to waddle over to the ledge and started to climb. "I love that woman." Konnor mumbled to himself before following close behind. 

So I am struggling with something. I really want to share an original story with everyone. But my need for a perfect story is coming out and I just can't. So I have two options. 
          
          1. I can post the story and have everyone give me Constructive Criticism on it
          
          2. I can just not post it and forever cry myself to sleep Because I will never get a perfect story out-
          
          So, can you all help me with this? I would very much appreciate it if you all left a vote in my reply box under this announcement to tell me which I should do. 
          
          
          XOXO- KizzilaSuzanne
          
          Ps. This is a fantasy story, so I'm not exactly sure how many of you will like it.