@Preethi901 I definitely did not say I didn't like your stories or that they weren't my type. I only pointed out some areas that even if the story is a "wattpad," the reader at least should believe what they are reading. I in no way meant my comments to be insulting. That wasn't the intent, and it's unfortunate that you took it that way. I also said I'd continue to read it! Which I did complete and was in the middle of completing reading part 2 before it became inaccessible. I wouldn't read something if I thought it wasn't interesting or had great potential.