I would be honoured. I'm enjoying your story as it is different than some of the others I have read. Pria's character is coming thru well and we have a good grasp of her character, as well as learning more about her as the story developes and I suspect she is learning about herself too. I haven't unfortunately got a grasp of Damien 's characteristics. I'm guessing he is still developing? Thank you for the story. Please keep writing.