KnightsOfTheTunnel

Wow I've been away for awhile and I come back to 400 reads on 'It Began with Blood'.  I'll have more to update soon!

MegMarilyn

It Began with Blood. Is okay. I think you should take more time on each portion. Maybe instead f going for length you do a little bit at a time every chance you get. That way each portion is really well detailed etc. etc... :D
          http://www.wattpad.com/user/MegMarilyn
          
          I have two stories. They are short, so don't freak. haha.
          HOLLY'S DARE
          and 
          DARK ENOUGH 
          thank you
          for any help you can give