It Began with Blood. Is okay. I think you should take more time on each portion. Maybe instead f going for length you do a little bit at a time every chance you get. That way each portion is really well detailed etc. etc... :D
http://www.wattpad.com/user/MegMarilyn
I have two stories. They are short, so don't freak. haha.
HOLLY'S DARE
and
DARK ENOUGH
thank you
for any help you can give
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