Sorry, this is my third message to you. I was reading Papercuts and it isn't letting me comment, so here it is.
You definitley put soul into writing this. Its amazingly written, not a flaw to be found throughout. All I can say is to keep writing. And you're thirteen. Woah, thats a sweet gift you have right there.
Hey you're a fan of Erin Hunter too! I was for YEARS, but then I got really obsessed The Hunger Games...I guess I'm a little behind now, but oh well. There's still more of summer vacation.
Hello, I see that no-one has welcomed you yet so I shall be the first. This is a great community for all readers and writers, so, get out there, mingle and have fun! Oh and if you need a cover, there's a club full of people willing to make one for you. xx
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