Known_Nuisance

It is with great pleasure I announce, Undertale: Heartlines is finished. Go check out those chapters!

starwars582

May I ask you a question 

starwars582

@Known_Nuisance on chapter 7 of the undertale book I put an idea there for what you could do as a what if have a look when you get the chance
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Known_Nuisance

I’ve been doing good! I’ve just been really busy lately, that’s why there hasn’t been any updates. I want to say I have around 3-5 chapters left.
            
            I actually haven’t considered a story for Undertale Yellow. I’d have to play around with that idea.
            
            Don’t worry, I have full intentions of finishing. Like I said I’ve just been busy.
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Deltaoftherune

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I was going to add on to question #1. 
          given that asher would presumably give up after frisk died(or comes back later), How would toriel feel about frisk's death? Would toriel actually destroy the exit earlier? 
          
          2. What would happen if frisk still died in chapter 7 but Asher didn't try to(or hesitated) to "kill" Napstablook? Would he still lose his sense of determination?
          
          3. Is the nemona from your Pokemon story the same nemona from scarlet and violet? Or are they two different characters with the same name?
          (pretty much a fun question lol)
          
          what would change if frisk and Asher was in Underfell? 
          
          4. Given that in that universe, all the monsters follow flowey's "kill or be killed" ideology.
          
          5. Given how Underfell has 3 endings(Trust Route, Closure Route, and Betrayal Route) How would frisk and asher adapt to Underfell?

Known_Nuisance

Sorry for taking so long to reply!
            
            1. I assume having heard about Frisk’s demise she’d probably destroy the exit pretty soon after that. Let’s say Frisk’s soul was shattered (like how it happens in the game) her sense of protection towards Asher is now greater. If Frisk’s soul persisted she’d keep it safe somewhere (if possible) and destroy the exit to prevent Asgore or anyone else coming to take it.
            
            2. I’d say he would say yes. At least for a good while. His best friend still died.
            
            3. Her name is Ramona. If I said Nemona it’s a typo I need to go back and fix. So no, not the same character.
            
            Unfortunately I can’t answer 4 or 5 since I know next to nothing about Underfell. 
            
            Sorry I couldn’t answer those two, but I still appreciate your questions!
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Deltaoftherune

Read the latest chapters of heartstrings, and I gotta say, it's the best undertale fanfic period. Although, I do have some questions 
          
          1. What would happen if asher managed to give asgore his soul?(before flowey kills asgore of course)
          
          2. Given that asher's soul was visible, what would happen if flowey attempted to claim asher's soul?(one where he succeeded and one where he failed)? What would asher's attack be?
          
          
          3. Seemingly random question, but what would happen or change if Frisk and asher was in glitchtale?
          
          I hope you're doing well out there! :)

Known_Nuisance

@Deltaoftherune Don't worry! I love questions like these. They're fun!
            
            1. If Frisk had stayed dead. If he really went through and "killed' Napstablook he would have regretted it. In that scenario the most realistic thing that would probably happen is he'd lose his sense of determination. Think about it, he just watched his best friend die. The closest thing he had to a family, and his most recent action was breaking a promise the two had made together. At the end of the day these are two fourteen year old kids who just want to be happy.
            
            2. This is a question I had a hard time answering when I was making his character. I believe he could've been given Integrity. I've tried my best to make Asher consistent in who he is. Whether things are going well or falling apart. He keeps his word, the piggyback ride joke, and his loyalty to Frisk. He doesn’t pretend to be something he’s not.
            
            3. Hehehehe
            
            4. It's been actual years since I've seen anything Underverse related, so I'll have to get back to you on that one!
            
            I hope you're doing well! Seriously, I encourage questions like these.
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Deltaoftherune

@Known_Nuisance No problem! Although I do have some more questions(if you don't mind)
            
            1. what if frisk stayed dead(or came back later) in chapter 7? What would asher do  after "killing" napstablook? 
            
            2. What would Asher's soul trait be if he had one like the other 6 humans?(given his character)
            
            (The last two are subjective, you don't have to answer if you don't want too:D)
            
            3. do you plan on making a deltarune and/or deltatraveler? I highly recommend you do so because the writing in both of them is as good(if not better) than undertale.
            
            4. What would change if frisk and asher was in underverse? what would the xtale of asher look like(if it exists)?
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Known_Nuisance

3. I’ll stick to season 1 since that’s the season I know best.  Megalomaniac - Sans would have to be going sicko mode to evade two humans attacking at once. If he manages that and the two decide to reset, one of them gets possessed by Chara while the other shifts to helping Sans and he absorb their soul. Yet Darker - Much like how Gaster isolated Frisk, I think Gaster would instead isolate Asher due to him being the more interesting anomaly. The rest would play out the same way. Determination - Now this is one’s interesting since so many different things can happen. Does Chara target Asher or Frisk to steal their determination? How would Chara manage to isolate them? Whoever isn’t the one that gets taken helps Sans and Flowey in the fight. They run away with whoever had their determination stolen. Your Best Friend - Gaster returns and apologizes to Asher for what happened before. They gear up to stop Chara. Whoever didn’t have their determination stolen is on guard duty with Gaster. It ends with whoever had it stolen becoming determined again, giving their soul to Flowey, and helping him become Asriel again.  Continue - Neither of them make much of a difference in this one, but Chara calls them both out for the multiple genocide routes. In the end Asriel returns the soul destroys the barrier and the other is happy to see them safe and alive. They both agree to destroy to reset button and continue..
            
            Whoo boy! I hope that makes sense! Thank you for your support!
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WjL630

I'm generally appalled on your level of writing! I generally hope you do more stories(if you manage to complete the two books, because I don't you to suffer burnout). I hope you do fnf, touhou or higurashi & umineko(higurashi & umineko probably last due to them being more lore heavy). Wherever you are, I hope you're doing well out there!
          

Known_Nuisance

@WjL630 I really appreciate that! Thank you so much for reading! I've got more ideas brewing, so I hope you stick around!
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