Koala_K

Hey, I just wanted to clarify something... I’m not neglecting my story or anything. I’ve actually been going back into earlier chapters and editing and rewriting some of them. When I was looking back one time, I read an earlier chapter and nearly died from how cringy it was. 
          	
          	Another reason I felt the need to fix them, was because a lot of my characters felt bland and pointless. So I’ve tried to add more depth and emotion to them, (I’ve even added new ones). 
          	
          	While I’ve been attempting (for all I know they could be even worse) to fix them, I’ve unintentionally made them much longer and snuck in some good ol’ fashioned symbolism and foreshadowing. Just so you know — that doesn’t mean that when I mention what colour the curtains are — that it is symbolic. I’m not a crazy English teacher. Although, sometimes I unintentionally do .... but that’s besides the point. 
          	
          	Either way, what I guess I’m trying to say — is try to bear through this with me. The book isn’t over. Trust me, there’s a lot more comin. 

Koala_K

Hey, I just wanted to clarify something... I’m not neglecting my story or anything. I’ve actually been going back into earlier chapters and editing and rewriting some of them. When I was looking back one time, I read an earlier chapter and nearly died from how cringy it was. 
          
          Another reason I felt the need to fix them, was because a lot of my characters felt bland and pointless. So I’ve tried to add more depth and emotion to them, (I’ve even added new ones). 
          
          While I’ve been attempting (for all I know they could be even worse) to fix them, I’ve unintentionally made them much longer and snuck in some good ol’ fashioned symbolism and foreshadowing. Just so you know — that doesn’t mean that when I mention what colour the curtains are — that it is symbolic. I’m not a crazy English teacher. Although, sometimes I unintentionally do .... but that’s besides the point. 
          
          Either way, what I guess I’m trying to say — is try to bear through this with me. The book isn’t over. Trust me, there’s a lot more comin.