Koanli

I mixed up my script so much trying to update/fix the story I high key might delete the entire thing and start from scratch again☠️This story has gotta be cursed

Koanli

@Crystal_Nightfall OMG IM SO LATE! But yeah, I gotta fix stuff haha
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Crystal_Nightfall

@Koanli Oh my gosh really?? Honestly I've been so busy recently and haven't been able to get back to the game, but the story's getting overhauled?! I'm going to miss it while it's gone, but I understand why you're doing it.
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Koanli

I mixed up my script so much trying to update/fix the story I high key might delete the entire thing and start from scratch again☠️This story has gotta be cursed

Koanli

@Crystal_Nightfall OMG IM SO LATE! But yeah, I gotta fix stuff haha
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Crystal_Nightfall

@Koanli Oh my gosh really?? Honestly I've been so busy recently and haven't been able to get back to the game, but the story's getting overhauled?! I'm going to miss it while it's gone, but I understand why you're doing it.
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Koanli

I'll be adding/deleting and adjusting a few chapters so the source material is true to the OG story I wrote when I was younger- it'll be a good time. Expect to see an extra chapter showing a new ending for book one in the coming weeks.

Koanli

My light novel is now a visual novel! It took me a year but I've developed my wattpad story into a game T_T It covers the first few chapters of the story and is very choice-driven~
          
          Bite Me! Visual Novel is free to play and playable on your phone as well, I'm terrible at promoting so I'll leave it at that! The link should show in my bio but please let me know if you can't see it!

Koanli

Chapters 50-53 Have been removed, sorry for the inconvenience

Crystal_Nightfall

@Koanli Thank you so much!!!
            I was waiting FOREVER for the darker stuff and now I'm EXCITED!!! I can't WAIT to see it!!
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Koanli

@Crystal_Nightfall Haha yeah, I just didn't like the direction it was going in. I had been keeping a lot of stuff out in fear of Wattpad removing the story off and it just doesn't feel right. Removing most of the x-rate and darker stalking chapters just takes away from my ornial story so I'm taking the risk and posting the chapters I wanted to. If they take it down, it is what is is T_T It's not fun knowing the better parts of the story have been hidden
            
            -Mad random but CONGRATULATIONS ON 120K!!! I'm so proud of you!!!! *Celebration dancing intensifies*
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Crystal_Nightfall

@Koanli Did something happen?
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Koanli

25-26
          New Chapters- Dark Content! The Chimera chapters have been replaced as I would to build them into a prologue- so chapters 25 and 26 have brand new relivatent content! Please check them out when you can, I worked super hard on them~  More updates soon!

Koanli

FREE ART FOR ADVICE!  Please roast me…
          
          If you’re one of my active readers, what am I doing wrong? I wanna know where the story seems boring, what makes it difficult to read and everything else you might dislike I’ve got nerves of steal and I NEVER take things personally Help me improve by sharing all your constructive criticism In return, you shall be draw in color (from the chest up). 
          
          If there ONE thing I can do to make the light novel better, what would you suggest?
          
          ✍(Active readers only) Come cook meI’ll still love you endlessly

Crystal_Nightfall

@Koanli Yeah I think that should be a prologue. And you’re welcome! Um draw another one. Make the dress a little longer and then just go wild with it lol. I trust you. Keep the colour scheme pink/purple because I guess that’s just my colour now  Thank you!
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Koanli

Thank you so much! And this isn’t mean in the slightest not that I’m complaining! I was thinking about removing the Chimeras chapter and writing a prologue instead. That way I can add in more relevant  drama so I’m definitely going to do that too! Again, I appreciate the feedback x10000! If you think of anything else feel feee to tell me As always, you’re good and golden-
            
            Do you want me to draw the same girl I did before or do you want something different this time around?
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Crystal_Nightfall

@Koanli Okay, in my personal opinion, the story started to seem "boring" as you'd say half way in because of lack of tension or conflict. 
            Unlike in the beginning when Bayleaf (never going to use her regular name) was struggling with school and could barely last a day, was arguing with her mother, insulting Max, getting mad at Seth and had 0 friends, now, everything's going right for both main characters. 
            Seth has partly gotten over his addiction and has a way of getting what he wants without offending Bayleaf. 
            Bayleaf has a large enough friend group, doesn't crash out in school, is okay with Seth's presence, has kinda mended her relationship with her mother, doesn't miss her previous home anymore, there's no threat from Susan's ex husband and even has landed a job. So therefore, there's no conflict. At least in my opinion.
            Hope this isn't mean....
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Koanli

FREE ART EVENT! FREE ART EVENT! FIRST COME FIRST SERVED  
          I’m doing an free art event for new readers, and current readers who haven’t read a lot of my story(5ish minutes for a free drawing)
          
          EVERY engaged reader that leaves me a comment/feesback on at least 1 chapter will be drawn in the hall of fame background Ocs, anime character, customized request- it don’t matter
          
          This means ACTUALLY reading at least a chapter as well to meet the min 5 mins reading that makes an engages reader‍↕️generic “wow that was good” or just commenting emotions doesn’t count since you don’t need to read to do that. It takes me time to do custom art, so it’s a reward that will be earned instead of handed out
          
          Story link is in my bio
          This limited time promotion is for ENGAGED readers only, that only registers as readers who spend more than 5 minutes reading✍Oooh~ Sparing that 5 minutes for a customized drawing is sooo hype
          
          If you’re one of my engaged readers, you’ll get a fully colored drawing from the shoulders up- But reading multiple chapters and leaving feedback might get you moreOpportunity ends soon  
          
          Note:  If it looks like you didn’t read and just scrolled to comment for free art- I WILL NOT DRAW YOU ANYTHINGI spend a lot of time and energy doing free drawings
          
          *For the 2 people I already were who’ve even reading chapters in bulk, you’ve earned a full body commission for free just because I feel like it GOING THE EXTRA MILE COUNTSReading multiple chapters and giving genuine feedback and reviews will guarantee better feee art commissions- but I’m limiting that to 5 peoples3 slots left

Koanli

@Crystal_Nightfall Bet
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Crystal_Nightfall

@Koanli Of course I did! You sent it on Reddit, right? I love it so much all the poses are FIRE!!
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Koanli

@Crystal_Nightfall neither do I, I’m tryna put in work for them reads Also, did you get the art I made for you?
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