Kodachi112

You can do a lot with a story when you trim unneeded characters and unneeded plot lines

Kodachi112

Good morning, afternoon, and evening,
          
          
          You might be wondering where The Ultimate Car Enthusiast has gone. Do not fret, it hasn’t been deleted. I’m planning on moving my story to a new website to reach a broader audience. 
          
           
          As soon as I publish chapters there, I shall provide the link in another announcement. If for some reason this doesn’t work out, I can just publish my book here again. 
          
          It’s just been unpublished, not deleted. I apologize for the inconvenience this may cause. I shall provide a link to the new site when my chapters are up. Thank you for reading,
          
          - Kodachi 

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Been a while since I updated. Chapter 44 has gone through some changes. 
          
          -Fixed inconsistencies
          -The original writing was around 1,000 words. I expanded the word count to 3,000 words, so if you don't read the expansion, you're gonna be confused. 
          
          That's about it.

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Much needed update for chapter 1 of The Ultimate Car Enthusiast 
          
          -Descriptions added
          -Some narrative dialogue has been removed
          -Characters no longer speak like they share a paragraph; one quote each as it should be
          -Actions and thoughts should be a tad more coherent
          -Paragraphs separated to avert walls of text
          -Small quality of life changes to Jade’s overall presence 
          
          

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I went ahead and showed my original book some love. You might think this is a small patch, but this comes with major quality of life updates. Read on to learn more. 
          
          
          Out of This World Gaming Chapter 12 update notes.
          
          -Multiple explétives have been removed to better quality of reading without the unwarranted swearing.
          -Paragraphs have undergone a massive Spring cleaning to better reading comprehension and untangle dialogue between characters. 
          -Lines of dialogue have been replaced with some that hope to better mirror personality. 
          -More description.
          -Adjusted voice lines to be written as intended. 
          
          Thanks for reading!
          -Kodachi 

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Chapter 32 patch notes
          
          -Regular readers of this book might know from earlier chapters that this book often invokes the Two Lines, No Waiting trope. Now, we're going to have Three Lines, Some Waiting. Try to stick together, it might get complicated from here on out, so pay attention!
          -Latest update as of 17:20 had to do with correcting word inconsistencies. 
          -Small typos and other grammatical errors have been fixed. 
          
          Thanks for reading