KokinaTenshi6991

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO EVERYONE!

Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991  Yokyo, Julian & Kinn live in Tokyo where they attend high school which so happens to be Shirokumo Boys school where Gero goes, when the announcement of boys joining sensha-do is announced and Gero's friends were talking about trying it on the other side of the cafeteria Julian, Yokyo and Kinn were also talking about the announcement, the 2 Heirs who knew who they were along with Yokyo thought about doing it was well but needed a tank
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Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991  Even when Mai and Chiyo hear "Julian" and "Kinn" names they don't immediately recognise or remember their sons because they buried them deep down in their memories and forgot them, so after the same/similar events of invading the Devils Mountain and the meeting they have in the Nishizumi house is when they reveal themselves to every only Gero actually knew they were because they and Yokyo told him and ask it keep it a secret.
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Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991  Tauko saved Juilan from a river he nearly drowned in, he knew Juilan was Chiyo Shimada's son because he worked for her family, he didn't tell Chiyo because he found out someone tried to kidnap Juilan so Tauko decided to hide Julian for his safety.
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KokinaTenshi6991

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO EVERYONE!

Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991  Yokyo, Julian & Kinn live in Tokyo where they attend high school which so happens to be Shirokumo Boys school where Gero goes, when the announcement of boys joining sensha-do is announced and Gero's friends were talking about trying it on the other side of the cafeteria Julian, Yokyo and Kinn were also talking about the announcement, the 2 Heirs who knew who they were along with Yokyo thought about doing it was well but needed a tank
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Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991  Even when Mai and Chiyo hear "Julian" and "Kinn" names they don't immediately recognise or remember their sons because they buried them deep down in their memories and forgot them, so after the same/similar events of invading the Devils Mountain and the meeting they have in the Nishizumi house is when they reveal themselves to every only Gero actually knew they were because they and Yokyo told him and ask it keep it a secret.
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Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991  Tauko saved Juilan from a river he nearly drowned in, he knew Juilan was Chiyo Shimada's son because he worked for her family, he didn't tell Chiyo because he found out someone tried to kidnap Juilan so Tauko decided to hide Julian for his safety.
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Malootrager

When I saw your reply stating you accept my ideas which thank you very much I'm happy that my ideas have been acknowledged, anyway you said you'll use some of my ideas in the next story I was trying to work out did you mean story as in the next arc of Missing Heir after international arc or new story set in Missing Heir universe by like a time skip or a whole new girls und panzer storyline not set in Missing Heir universe?
          I kinda hope it's the next story arc, which may I suggest it could be a "World Tour" arc where Gero and all go to other countries that didn't get much screen time before like Australia, Russia, Canada etc an just going back to Japan.

Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991  Chiyo would say to Maho, Shiho, Tsuneo & Mai that Dyke seems to be very protective of Sachi but don't know why, so after asking Fyke his story their shocked to hear about the death of his family especially his lil brother and they realise why Dyke acted the way he while asleep, it's because of his protective big brother instincts kicking in due to the loss of his lil brother he's now more protective of Sachi, so Maho decides to adopt Dyke as her son and new big brother to Sachi
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Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991  One day when Dyke was cuddling Sachi Chiyo wanted to hold Sachi and tried to pick her up but Dyke slapped her hands away while he's still asleep, mind you Chiyo tried again but Dyke slapped her hands away again, it then devolved into the comical slap away battle with Dyke the victor, Maho comes over and picks up her daughter with no trouble and finally Dyke wakes up and wonders why Chiyo looks angry at him
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Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991  Dyke Had a baby brother he was very protective of but with the boat accident where his mum, dad & and baby brother were still inside the boat went is sank he was broken and nearly gave up on life till he meet everyone of the JNST or more specifically Maho and Sachi, after seeing lil Sachi Dyke decided he was going to protect Maho's daughter to atone for failing to protect his baby brother, he spends lots of time with Sachi and Maho becoming practically apart of Maho's family
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Malootrager

Hey-O Kokina hope your having pleasant days, just thought I'd let you know that I've been replying to your replies from before, I've had to break up my first character idea since there seems to be a limit on how much you can type, so I hope you have a look in your free time and let me know what you think about my ideas ok.

Malootrager

When Ryoto first meets Gero he couldn't sense Ryoto's massive aura and enormous strength, initially Ryoto held a Grudge towards the 3 families and apon learning Gero, Kaede & Mika are his counterparts in the other families his immediate thoughts was "kill all three" so he became friends with them to infiltrate and destroy them from the inside, as Ryoto learned more he finds out that Gero, Mika & Kaede have no clue that there are actually 4 families not 3, even Shiho, Mai & Chiyo have no clue as well which makes Ryoto question what's the point of destroying the 3 families because of an old Grudge
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Malootrager

After many many many years the Mitsuyoko family has only one living member left, his name is Ryoto Mitsuyoko and he is incredible strong he's on par with Gero Nishizumi, Mark Jacka, Royce Jackson and Erika Nishizumi but he might be even stronger than Gero because the Mitsuyoko family/Clan are trained in all three families styles (hunter, assassin & warrior) making the Mitsuyoko the dominant one.
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Malootrager

@Malootrager Here's an idea for you Kokina because you established the lore of the 3 family's that being Nishizumi, Shimada and Yamato are the Hunters (Nishizumi) the Assassins (Shimada) and the Yamato (Warriors) what if there was a fourth family/Clan The Mitsuyoko and they are the Guardsman or Guardians, this family/Clan were to protect the leader in the past (the Shogun I think), the Mitsuyoko also kept the other 3 family/clans in check but the 3 turned against the Mitsuyoko family nearly completely wiping them out completely, but the survivors managed escape
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Malootrager

I've been thinking about somethings with this fanfiction,  I'm guessing Kin is actually Mai Yamato's sisters son because of how Mai said when she saw Kin on the bullet train he seemed familiar and since Kin has been in the experiments since the startsince he was very little would coincide with the supposed accident of Mai's sister and her son and "If" Kin is Mai's nephew that would explain how he survived because of the Yamato blood.
          That's just my guess
          
          Second thing is I can't remember if you tied up this loose end or not but did we get to find out who Gero's Aniki was? The gentleman with blond spiky hair that Gero's friends saw in his memories? the guy who was Gero's only friend he had, they sat at the park and talked about tanks?.

Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991  a funny thought just crossed my mind, what "if" the Princess Charlotte falls in love with Gero and Gero starts develop feelings for Charlotte and her mother the Queen notices this and decides to repay Gero for liberating Britain of Pandora by offering her daughters hand in marriage whitch would shock everyone and make the wives feel challenged but Gero accepts which leads to him getting comically beaten up by his wives.
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Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991  another idea came to me for Sako and Mark's relationship they both become The White Tiger's guard dogs, assigned by Shiho, Tsuneo, Chiyo and Mai to protect and guard the safety of Gero and his wives, while these 2 have relationships as well, Sako and Assam, Mark and Maho which Mark pledges to protect and be the Father of lil Sachi, one thought I can't decide on is would Mark and Sako operate command a single tank or do they each get their own tanks befitting their positions as The White Tiger's guard dogs?
            Hope you might have an opinion on this 
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Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991 I had another thought, Mark loves Maho-chan but he's to nervous to tell her but others can already see it, Sako was the first to figure it out and encouraged him to confess his feeling but things got in the way and he thinks Maho hates him but in actual fact Maho loves Mark too.
            Just  thought would add some extra dynamics to the relationship.
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Malootrager

G'day Kokina I love this work of yours, I started reading this a whole week ago and its taken a week of reading from the first chapter to chapter 115 and I gotta say HOLY WOW this story has been an incredible reading for me, I will admit that there were a few times I started crying that's how much of an impact this story has made on me, I hope you continue this work for a bit longer but I assume that you'll be making one more arc and finish the story of The Missing Heir. Whenever I watch a movie or series or anime or read a manga I always tend to come up with characters and half baked stories from them, just wondering if you'd like to hear some of the little ideas that I've made and maybe you could use them as som inspiration for this story and any new fanfiction your gunna make.
          Hope to hear from you.

Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991  one thought I had with family skills like Hunter domain, murderous impulse, Mirage realm, Lurk, Overwhelm and Warriors arena  what if there was one skill that can cancel out all of them? and its called Extinction
            
            That's just another idea I had
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Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991  I'd like to send you the sketches with improvements to them so I was wondering it you have X or Discord so I could DM them to you
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Malootrager

@KokinaTenshi6991  oh by the way with the Sako character I made for you I've actually made a way he looks, I reperposded a few sketches I made for another gip guy character I came up with, there's no full body view more shoulders and up, there's normal look along with Secred possession eyes and Primordial Core blood eyes as well as scar marks on his face, the scars mean Sako got his face injured and had surgery but his face now looks different from now on 
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LorenzoFerrari2002

Good news, mate! Today is my 22th birthday!

LorenzoFerrari2002

@KokinaTenshi6991 
            I'm not angry.
            
            But next time, check the calendar. You're almost 5 months late...
            
            But thanks anyways
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KokinaTenshi6991

@LorenzoFerrari2002 Belated Happy Birthday to ya! I'm sorry for the late greetings been very busy and didn't see this! Cheers to you and hope you are doing fantastic!
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