Kombupop

@FanofShan1 no prob :P your story looks awesome! i'm only reading the prologue now though, i'm sure it's going to be grest
          	

ZiggyhollyxxxCK123

heya - We are Meg and Bella and we want to know if you will read our story. It is called 'Lost relatives, forbidden love, enemies to be, best friends and family all in one house. DON'T TRY IT.' 
          
          it is about this girl named Saffron who moves in with her best friend who lives in this huge house. This other family lives there too and Jade (Who is part of the other family) is hated my Saffron strait away. 
          Saffron falls for Joseph the first time she lays eyes on him but Jade and Him used to date and jade is still convinced that they are. 
          
          Lodes more great stuff happens and the only person saffron knows - other than her dad and brother jasper - is her best friend Vicky. 
          
          Anyway could you please read it and tell us what you think. Even if you think it is rubbish tell us what you don’t like and how to improve. 
          Also please don’t be put off by the name. We are trying to work on it. If you have any ideas then please don’t hesitate to tell us.
          
          thank you ~ 
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          (¸.•´ (¸.•` ¤ Meg & Bella.
          
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Aetila

Hey there! 
          I'm new to Watt pad, and I was wondering if y o u could read one of my sto ri es and comment on it! (voti ng , f anning, and whatever ar e a ll o ptional, its the revi ews I nee d!) I'd love to retu rn the fav or, and I will! 
          I know this mig ht annoy you, but anything i s greatly appreciated! Thanks f o r reading this! 
          -Celeste 
          My Stories--Gol den Dawn; Karis Gebelin was j u st your typical Hawaii tra ns pl ant to Manhattan, obsess ive to p student who actually pro cras tinates everything, and b ound of Ivy; future care erist and c urrent fortune tel ler. U ntil-- that is--she fin ds out everyth ing she aced is more o r less a ben trevato-- so good bye model student and strivin g socialit e--and hell o demons layer/alche mist and automatic industry ty coon--t hat is, if she survives. 
          
          Elven Mob Bosse s and Rebel Heirs--Welcome t o a world where elves,well, a re n 't your fairy tale elves. Ru le d in a ochlocracy, of O liga rch s and tech savvy mega­corpo rati ons, of underworld crimin al ru le, resistance in this m obocra cy is futile wh en your King ca n be your dish washer i n one da y. Intergala ctic best seller an d future O ligarch, K ronos fød t av Mø rke’skala soon finds out ho w his fickl e world migh t cha nge--with his help too.