@KonaKona666
you’re disgusting. tearing authors down for imperfect grammar. several of them have explicitly stated that english isn’t their first language. you continue to bash them even when you know that it might not be perfect. you need to take a step back and reevaluate yourself because currently, you’re kind of a dïck.
the zombies wont eat u during zombie apocolypse dont worry they only eat people with brains
Your comments give me life, come back on Wattpad pls
@ OBSERVERD I'm back. I just need to find some bad creepypasta fanfics that I didn't read yet.
Hello, @KonaKona666. I'm writing to you regarding the recent comment you wrote on my story. And after scrolling through the "recent activity" section of your profile to see if I was the only one who received a nasty comment from you, I found myself sadly mistaken. On behalf of myself and other writers, it's not your position to be correcting their work, or saying mean things about it. In most cases regarding grammar, English is not their first language, or it was simply a typo they didn't mean. A little respect for the writing community would be nice, especially considering the fact that you haven't written anything at all. It's not your place to decide whether someone's story is good or not, and it would be most wonderful if you didn't comment things like, "You know I already saw that story and I think you are just copying it with a few differences and some worse grammar now and then." Or, "There was no suspense. Everything went to fast. I don't feel the connection between those characters. Also there was a lot of grammar errors. Please proof check your story." Unless your opinion is asked for regarding your thoughts on someone's story, please don't give it if you're going to be rude. ^^ Thanks!
@KonaKona666 just putting it out there, we don’t think our stories are perfect, but we are proud of them, and you commenting on other people’s books in so many chapters negatively isn’t helping. If you put it in a nicer way maybe then it would be appreciated rather than ignored. I understand that you might want to get straight to the point but the ways in which you say some things can put people down. You obviously don’t understand this, and you’re not mature enough to either, but I would appreciate if you just kept your negative comments to yourself thank you very much
@KonaKona666 who are you to tell people that, I’d like to see you do better, I don’t see any stories written by you, so they have gone a lot further than you have, please do no not disrespect other users, thank you
Thank you very much for voting!
Please continue to support my book and read on!
ありがとうございます！
-ゆずき•ヨクマ
@KonaKona666 Thanks so much for the feedback! Hehe alot of what you mentioned is planned for ahead chapters so I'm glad to hear I'm going on the right track! I will proofread more of my work (its so hard to type chapters up on the phone! On Desktop mode it corrects you but not on mobile ;-;) Thank you for your feedback and support! Please continue to support me and the book! -ゆずき•ヨクマ
@ YuzukiYokuma That's great, because most people think there is no point in talking. They think that their story is perfect.
I liked the story but I also like when authors tease readers, so it would be great if Protagonist and Uta had more time to get to know each other. And if Protagonist was kind of scared of ghouls (but that is more personal thing).
There were some grammar errors do you should proof read it. You can also watch sentences if they are good sounding and good to read. I am waiting for more updates because the story is cool.
You read bill chiper x reader? well I don't juge I do to (smile)
that profile pictures freaking me the f uck out
