Kone Thane Maztorn

I was wondering if you could check out my book Rain. I've been editing and I would love to hear your honest opinion.

The second entry point in The Legend of Everend is up! Please leave comments, thank you!
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This is the first part of The Legend of Everend! I would really appreciate if you give some feedbacks! Thank you. https://www.wattpad.com/story/196769840