iwatami16

me preguntaba siharías una historia sobre este H se llama Kimi wa Yasashiku Netorareru que la trama me parece muy similar y también se meocurrede darle cierto vuelta a la trama verás según el canon la protagonista femenina rio pierde su virginidad con el tipo rubio de la trama ya de ahí se vuelve adicta al sexo pero y si haces que ella se meta con haruka a clases de artes marciales y que estos pasen mucho tiempo juntos donde al estar solos en su casa por accidente empiezan a leer libros ecchis donde se despierte su curiosidad sobre el sexo y de ahí podrías ir manejando la trama eliminando una de los punto más débiles de los protagonistas de ntr que estos son densos y a veces no tiene interés en el sexo con eso el irá experimentando con ella y con las demás protagonistas que se interesan en él puedes crear situaciones donde las salve y de ahí ellas tratarán de llamar su atención provocando situaciones H qué opinas de esa idea
          Hi I just wanted to say that I liked the series so far and I was wondering if in the future you would do a story about this H it's called Kimi wa Yasashiku Netorareru that the plot seems very similar to me and I can also think of a way to give the plot a certain twist, you see according to the canon the female protagonist Rio loses her virginity with the blonde guy in the plot and from there she becomes addicted to sex but what if you make her get into martial arts classes with Haruka and that they spend a lot of time together where being alone in their house by accident they start reading ecchi books where their curiosity about sex is awakened and from there you could manage the plot by eliminating one of the weakest points of the NTR protagonists that they are dense and sometimes have no interest in sex with that he will experiment with her and with the other protagonists who are interested in him you can create situations where he saves them and from there they will try to get his attention causing situations H what do you think of that idea

Lordofheros

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KonoToastDa

@Lordofheros Thanks! Glad to see people liking my smut!
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Lordofheros

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KonoToastDa

@Lordofheros Thanks for the feedback :)
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Lordofheros

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KonoToastDa

@Lordofheros Thank you! I'm happy my work is putting smiles on people's faces :D
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Lordofheros

Sorry for shity dick joke lol
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a-friendly-user

Are you a toast? Because i want to put you inna toaster

KonoToastDa

@a-friendly-user Goodness gracious :0
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a-friendly-user

@a-friendly-user boutta dunk you to a toaster and spread some mayonaise ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
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