GabrielCosta149

It's looks like I'm your first follower

Krieza20

@GabrielCosta149 more drama and good ideas is pretty vague 
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GabrielCosta149

To be honest I didn't see any bad things in your Story but if you have a suggestion that has more character drama and good ideas
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Krieza20

@GabrielCosta149 I don't know what the future holds, but I would appreciate if you guys had any advice on what to improve in my chapter, or any suggestions, I didn't really structure a road map or anything, I'm writing from the top of my head, this chapter
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