buddies after reading it, give ur comments... wt u felt , wt u wanna change , wt inspired u and wt neeeds more in this story...
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Nah! No need to change anything. But try to make useful stories or poems. Better to write poems. Poetry is nice than action or mystery thriller stories that u had written. Make a poem book of your feelings and more more. Anyways u had good efforts. Keep it up !!!!
Buddies i hv add a new chater in it nw and sorry for updating the chapter lately. if u have time then read and give ur comments. here after i will try to add the chapters soon...
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