@KristenCook
Hi Kristen, thanks so much for voting on "Twisted Kingdoms"! I hope you enjoyed it, and keep sticking around for the rest of the journey ;-) don't be afraid to criticise anything that doesn't sit well with you. In the meantime, have a great weekend!
Hi Kristen! Thanks for reading and voting on SHADOW WEAVER. I always get excited when I see new readers enjoying the book :) Hope you continue to like it!
Thanks for the fan! :)@KristenCook
Thanks I'll try to go over what you said and I'm already putting more details in the 2 page and I go over the first one and I love your story so keep it up ;)@petlover002
@KristenCook HI! So I read your story. First thing I want to say is that what I'm about to tell you, about your book, is not meant to be offensive or rude in any way; it is just my opinion and you can choose to agree or disagree with it. One: You have a nice plot. I like how your character isn't some girl that has been sold off by her parents or is some average teen that meets the main character at school. Two: Your story is a little short. What you can do is add more detail. Maybe talk about why Rosalem is on the streets; a great background story would really help your story, you don't have to give away the entire story at once. You could separate them in small parts throughout the book. This will also help slow down your story; Don't be so quick to introduce your main love interests, sometimes it works and sometimes it doesn't. Three: Grab the readers attention! When I read your introduction/ preview, it didn't really spark my interest. To me it sounded monotone and that you just wanted to get it out of the way. Really focus hard on putting more effort in your work. One way you can do this, is work on your sentence structure. Using Microsoft Word can help; write on it before posting on wattpad or any other site you use. This doesn't really bother me though, because I say, if I can understand it then there is no problem. But please take account that it might annoy others. Four: Make it your own! You have a great beginning, but I'm just worried it might become too generic. This isn't your fault, it's just that there are so many Vamp stories that it is hard to be original. So try your best! Finally: Keep On Writing! The more you write the better the writer you will become. When I first started my story, the grammar and the plot itself was pretty crappy,(Depends on whose reading I guess.) but as I continued to write, I found myself catching mistakes, using better words, etc. SO DON'T STOP WRITING!! Thanks for hearing me out and Good Luck!
HI every one im going to start writing story's on here
if u can give me tips i would love that very much