@KristopherGrows
The first edits of parts 1 and 2 of Vandal Valkyrie are now complete and posted to Wattpad. The manuscript is significantly cleaner, though of course I'd be glad to hear of whatever errors still persist. Part 3 is still the rough draft. For anyone midway through, be aware that some of the text styling conventions used have been changed in the edited chapters. I hope this doesn't cause too much confusion for the chapters still in the rough draft format.
Vandal Valkyrie is complete, totalling 100,800 words by the end. Many thanks to everyone who helped out with comments and suggestions. I hope you will enjoy the full story now that it is done. In other news, I've heard that the story will be featured come May 12th. Yay!
The big grammar edit is complete. Hopefully, comma usage and dialog tags are fixed throughout.
Thank you kindly for the follow! I found your feedback exceedingly interesting, in so much as every point of confusion you zeroed in on was rather apt (albeit deliberate), but you were the first to pick up on any of it in any detail.
Intriguing mind you have.
The changeover of Vandal Valkyrie to shorter, but more numerous, chapters is complete. Each chapter has been divided into three and subtitled. Also the historical interludes have been moved to the ends of chapters and I've run through each with Grammarly, mostly to improve comma usage somewhat. Enjoy!
I ranked! It's not a good rank, #851 in Fantasy, but it is the first time and I'm a little stoked.
A map and other graphics have been added.
And chapter 15 is up now 2 months early. Still on track for completion by June.
I had a bout of inspiration, so chapter 14 is up a month early. Best guess is that the book will be completed some time in June
Chapter Ten is up