My favorite would have to be perfect night mare I'm in love with It, The characters could be a little deeper, you should add more detail into their attitudes and thoughts, let the scenes full longer and add more detail and adjectives to each and everything, It will make the story longer and more in depth, It will draw people in keep them reading, I read this book in media studies at school with another wattpad friend and she really enjoyed it too, keep going, It's really amazing xXx