@Mason_Beal :D Made my day! But honestly, after I read your beginning, I kinda want you to keep away from my story. My ego as an author always smarts when I meet up with amazing writers. And I meet up with many of them all of a sudden.
Thanks for the comments, and I'll take your suggestion to heart in writing in past tense when I edit after I finish the story. +Much appreciated, you just gained a follower. ^_^
@KatjaXXXO I am sorry I didn't reply right away. No internet at home. You know what. You are not the only author on here that writes in present tense. There is wdwholly and she pulls it off wonderfully. It was just be remembering my English classes in high school and our teachers repeating over and over again you can't use the present tense in a narrative. Well, maybe it is time we change the rules to the game :D Thank you for your sweet message and I can't wait to read on!
Wow your words of wisdom really did fire me up. You definitely know what you're talking about and that makes me that much more excited to get my story out there. Thanks for the advice!
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