Krystal_Butterflies

You’re welcome! I was pleasantly surprised with this one, as it took a bit of a different turn than I was expecting. 
            
            Great job! 
            
            My only critique would be to enhance the reading experience, maybe add a slight twist to each plot point? 
            
            Not to say that your story was predictable, but I hope you understand what I’m trying to convey.
            
            I also only got this notification today, so I’m sorry for the late reply.