Reborn as a side character in the beastworld was a brilliant read. I have not read the original text, just a different fanfic and it brought me lots of joy seeing another interpretation. Your humor or wording was comical in the most natural way, you balanced the healthy amount of characters better than you usually see with similar numbers. Points I could pick for constructive criticism, Mal/Ryan duo was handled admirably and I would of liked clearer answers for what happened to them, I was happy with Olly’s independence and found Becky/Molly/traumatised females direction wasn’t completely clear and from the sounds of it most decent places to stay had been destroyed so their effort to leave the heaven didn’t make complete sense.
All in all the story went well as a whole and if anything I’d want longer, detailed chapters of your awesome writing.
Thanks for the fun read from across the pond ❤️