Kurai_BlueSerenity

Helloooo people of the earth. :] 
          	So, I need help. (those a 3 words I dislike using!)
          	I keep accumulating so many ideas since I literally have my whole plot written out and I keep improving on it, but the actual writing process goes very slowly.
          	Right now, I'm about 95%done with chapter 3, but I feel like I need more opinions and feedback on chapters 1 and 2 before I post it.
          	So as a fellow reader and writer, I'm asking you guys to tell me what you honestly think and give feedback. Even if you don't have the time yourself but you have a friend that does, anything is appreciated! Thank you! ^o^

killer___b

thanks so much for your follow...I'm currently asking for suggestions from all my followers about how to improve my story. if you have any, just drop me a message, it would be grate to see what you think and of ways it could be made better

Kurai_BlueSerenity

Helloooo people of the earth. :] 
          So, I need help. (those a 3 words I dislike using!)
          I keep accumulating so many ideas since I literally have my whole plot written out and I keep improving on it, but the actual writing process goes very slowly.
          Right now, I'm about 95%done with chapter 3, but I feel like I need more opinions and feedback on chapters 1 and 2 before I post it.
          So as a fellow reader and writer, I'm asking you guys to tell me what you honestly think and give feedback. Even if you don't have the time yourself but you have a friend that does, anything is appreciated! Thank you! ^o^