@ijacq1050 maybe put in some little adventure that leads to meeting a badass new character
F.E// some mysterious villain kidnaps Kagome and like every other time, Inuyasha attempts to get her back by traking dien her scent. Then he has to fight against that villain and he turns out corrupted by the shikon jewel, once he's purified he joins the gang and they do what they do best etc...
Hi, I hope you're healthy and safe wherever you are! I released a new book titled "Haruno's Determination", I'd be grateful if you spare some of your time to check it out! Thanks!
Thank u so much for reading my crappy book. It means so much to me that someone enjoys it. Your view and votes mean everything to me. It makes me so inspired to write more. Thank you. Have a nice day
Thank you for all the votes I know there's a lot of mistakes English isn't my first language but I've been speaking it my whole life(kinda) so I hope it wasn't too confusing for you