GothicAngel1205

*Throws confetti in the air* Thank you for following me and thank you for voting on Beyond Our Titles ^_^

Kuroneco

but I really like the story, keep up the good work =D
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Kuroneco

Just a little critic, that may help you with other works, when there is a time skip you shuld separate the paragraphs in some way, for example lines or something. When you are whriting something that happened in the past you shuld put it in italics or put flashback at the start and end of flashback at the end, thats all
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Kuroneco

you have nothing to thank me for, I jast like your work, and I just finished the third book!! I'm glad that Pyro didn't betray him, I was hurt when it was known that he was the vampire's leader but then really happy when it wasn't like that =P
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