KurosawaKaji

Hi guys, I am trying to create an original story. I hope you can help me by reading and commenting on the chapters about what you think could be better.
          	
          	Your feedback, suggestions, and creative criticisms are always welcome. 
          	
          	The new book is called "The Chaos Crystal and the Hero From Another World". 
          	
          	Thank you! 

KurosawaKaji

Hi guys, I am trying to create an original story. I hope you can help me by reading and commenting on the chapters about what you think could be better.
          
          Your feedback, suggestions, and creative criticisms are always welcome. 
          
          The new book is called "The Chaos Crystal and the Hero From Another World". 
          
          Thank you! 

IynStein

Welp....thanks for being able to share such a cool and wonderful,godly and, a total boner wrecking story ^^

IynStein

Well thanks man
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IynStein

May the loli kingdom welcomes you in its cozy cold f***** cell(prison) xD
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IynStein

Your legacy will be passed down to my kids then to his kid...just and a total of s*** wrecking cycle of generations...for your generosity I shall pray for the gods to give lots of vitality and strong fu***** hips when grinding on that f***** loli sh** wrack waifu
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IynStein

Deleted....sob*

IynStein

I had the first arc...never will delete this piece of art 
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IynStein

Sob* I should have read the arc 2 & 3 when I had the chance
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KurosawaKaji

@IynStein  Sorry man. Wattpad deleted them all. 
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