Kxtelynnnnnnn

brand new update ;)

Amandag0ld

Hey I just wanted to say I like your book so far but I have some constructive criticism. Maybe you could make your chapters just a tiny bit longer,And add a backstory
          
           when I first started reading I saw that there was not a back story on what her life was like before her brother was killed.
          
          But these are just my opinions
          
          

Kxtelynnnnnnn

Thank you so much for the advice I will definitely make my chapters longer. Also in my newest chapter I started to fill in on her past life. Glad you're enjoying so far and I hope you continue to read my book! Thanks again! ☺️❤️
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