KyleAlingus

So... I've been away for a while. That's very apparent.
          	
          	I'm not going to make any false promises that I'm back and fully committed to writing since it has been and still is a busy time in my life, but I'm still here and these stories will still continue.
          	
          	I've been going back and reviewing my work to find ways of improving. After finding some things about my writing style, I thought I'd y'all on my writing style and how I could better it in the long run.
          	
          	Am I not adding enough details? Are the relationships forming too fast? Like would a slower burn be better or is my current pace fine? Are the reaction stories going to continue? (Yes, lol. They will.)
          	
          	Just stuff like that that'd just help.
          	
          	Appreciate y'all.

ChristopherWoolard

@KyleAlingus When are you updating your Reaction stories? It's been Months, dude.
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Ladydimondo

@KyleAlingus It's good to know you're still going, I read one piece watches death battle and I think your writing is good as it is, I would appreciate it if you added some details to their conversations but that doesn't make your writing any less amazing and I can't wait for more chapters
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ChristopherWoolard

@KyleAlingus Glad to hear that your back!
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KyleAlingus

So... I've been away for a while. That's very apparent.
          
          I'm not going to make any false promises that I'm back and fully committed to writing since it has been and still is a busy time in my life, but I'm still here and these stories will still continue.
          
          I've been going back and reviewing my work to find ways of improving. After finding some things about my writing style, I thought I'd y'all on my writing style and how I could better it in the long run.
          
          Am I not adding enough details? Are the relationships forming too fast? Like would a slower burn be better or is my current pace fine? Are the reaction stories going to continue? (Yes, lol. They will.)
          
          Just stuff like that that'd just help.
          
          Appreciate y'all.

ChristopherWoolard

@KyleAlingus When are you updating your Reaction stories? It's been Months, dude.
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Ladydimondo

@KyleAlingus It's good to know you're still going, I read one piece watches death battle and I think your writing is good as it is, I would appreciate it if you added some details to their conversations but that doesn't make your writing any less amazing and I can't wait for more chapters
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ChristopherWoolard

@KyleAlingus Glad to hear that your back!
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TaNajjaNellum

@KyleAlingus hey how are you doing and I know you are probably busy but I got a story idea for you and you can do it at a later time but I just wanted to give this to you.  This story idea is called Thunder Goddess, here the mc name is Thor Odinsdottir and her face claim is Sophie Turner https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EBNxigAUIAAQAvk?format=jpg&name=900x900  and here the reason why she is a red head instead of blonde is because going with an accurate Thor from Norse Mythology look and here is her suit https://i.pinimg.com/1200x/fb/33/02/fb3302ceab1b4f684fb3f020e7503803.jpg
          
          and her Powers and Abilities and Equipment will be of 616 Thor. #Equipment" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">https://characterprofile.fandom.com/wiki/Thor_(Marvel_Comics #Equipment</a> https://www.deviantart.com/bangjang96/art/Thor-Ragnaroks-Into-DEATH-BATTLE-788005050
          
          and her personality will be very stoic and serious in a fight and when people threaten her loved ones, and she is Incredibly funny and laid-back as well. and Thor is intersex but so is her lovers and it will be four lovers.
          1. Diana Prince https://www.deviantart.com/rangmover/art/Wonder-Woman-Diana-985177571
          
          2. Super-Girl https://www.deviantart.com/cga3d/art/SuperGirl-935744216
          
          3. Scarlet Witch https://pbs.twimg.com/media/FuseFfIXoAE5-vy?format=jpg&name=large
          
          4. Black Widow https://www.deviantart.com/cga3d/art/MARVELUST-Black-Widow-Avenger-Edition-1110164358

RemnantPaladin

@ ChristopherWoolard  not a bad idea.....but have another one
          
          Transformers One 
          
          Jaune Arc as Orion Pax/Optimus Prime 
          Adam Taurus as D-16/Megatron
          Yang Xiao Long as B-127
          Weiss Schnee as Elita-1
          Ozpin as Alpha Trion 
          James Ironwood as Sentinel Prime