Kyoto_Dragonmaster

So the next few chapters of Roanoke are going to be slow. Reading wise anyway. It's just Shawn learning about how the planet functions. These also will be edited, changed, updated through out the rest of the story as building a government system and society from scratch is not easy.  If you read it and have suggestions for filling in any holes that could break the system let me know so i can adjust it. Also remember this is fiction, not reality and not a perfect world

Kyoto_Dragonmaster

@AletheaLyons  honestly my favorite part of any story
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Kyoto_Dragonmaster

So the next few chapters of Roanoke are going to be slow. Reading wise anyway. It's just Shawn learning about how the planet functions. These also will be edited, changed, updated through out the rest of the story as building a government system and society from scratch is not easy.  If you read it and have suggestions for filling in any holes that could break the system let me know so i can adjust it. Also remember this is fiction, not reality and not a perfect world

Kyoto_Dragonmaster

@AletheaLyons  honestly my favorite part of any story
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Kyoto_Dragonmaster

Added more to Legacy of the Fallen. I am getting close to the end of My current draft so the future updates will be a bit longer but the shall be fresh of the brain. Also warning now that it shall by all drafts and my continuity with names may not be the best. So anyone who catches anything please let  me know so i can fix them as needed