Kyrokios
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Putting your characters through heaps and heaps of trauma is not character depth. Do not mistake it for that shit. Nothing wrong with a dark story but if your character is nothing but decorated by awful trauma and dark times yet we've seen nothing new to them or any type of lesson learned, what the fuck are you even doing this tragedy shit for then? Give it a point. Don't throw it around for the sake of torturing your characters.
EpicistGamer1
@Kyrokios exactly dude the character's gotta change in some way, otherwise you're writing "goku BETRAYED and TRAPPED in the time chamber for 100 BILLION MILLION ZILLION years" version 2.0
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