AlexandraMcDevitt
I wanted to ask when do you think your next chapter is going to be out cuz I've been dying to know what those boys are going to do with that scary guy behind them. Also for the bribing scene to me how I see how your chapters are going to go I was thinking that maybe you could have tried to get the information in ikor has since he's the mayor's son in exchange for their freedom. You don't have to let the bad guys know that he's his son he can and just say his dad works at City Hall. Also when you were asking that I was first thinking the boys get captured and stuff and they are trying to pursue riff into using his lock picking skill to unlock something for them so they can get into a place easily he and then go out without being noticed and exchange for not harming his friend. But that's just my you do you and good luck with your writing