Bloodykook

Bloodykook

@Bloodykook You can just drop the comment in the story itself, that work for me!  Thank you for offering to give feedback!” (^-^).
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L1zaster

@Bloodykook hihi! I just took a quick look, I'll read the rest if I have time tonight :)
            
            How would you like me to give feedback? We can connect on a different app and discuss, or I can drop a comment anywhere I see a mistake. 
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Bloodykook

Hey author actually I want your help :).

L1zaster

@Bloodykook oh that's cool! Yep I'm first language English, if you need help I can definitely edit. But I won't have that much time to do it :( 
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Bloodykook

@L1zaster Well, ah, how should I say this I saw your comment on the story (Bun Bun Mine) or something like that You said you're an English speaker .I thought you could help me in English , back then I did wrote a story, but with AI and things happend I deleted the story, but now I don't want to write a story by AI but by myself, so I just want someone to guide me. I thought you could help me, but it's fine if you deny it, no worries, and thank you for your time, dear.
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L1zaster

@Bloodykook hihi with what? 
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urmomsaggytits

UR THE ONE WITH THE SUICIDAL HAMSTER SOBS rip liza ham

urmomsaggytits

@L1zaster HAHA ONG PLS HOW I GO TO SLEEP LATE SOMETIMES TOO IT SUCKSK
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