FIREEEE

CHAPTER 7 corrected
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1258356649-immortal-one-piece-x-reader-ch-farewell-7
          
          Enjoy babes

7 K ?!

IMMORTAL HAS 6K !?

Immortal turned 5k ! Big guy now. But please tell me for the fault only for the chapters I corrected  (cause I reedite everything and it make too much notification when you do the one I haven't touched yet.)
          
          Thank you all for reading and helping me ! I'll be working harder even if this story is weird. I really don't understand when I tho it was going to be okay. So don't forget to ready the first page everytime there's an update !

What the hellll did I wrote there

Update.
          
          I turned 20. Haven't blew any candle. My family forgot. And I was alone the whole day of my birthday. 
          
          Anyway, I wanna go. Very fare from here. I always did my best to never forget and make them feel special but.. I feel like they don't care a bit.
          
          I try to hide my tears by half joking but I'm deeply hurt and I resent them..

You won't hate me if I change Y/n reactions in the first chapters ? I want it to stick to the last chapters. I found it too out of place in the first chapter, I mean Y/n isn't as crazy as that, only with her most closed people. Not with total strangers...

SORRY WHAT ? 4K ?
          
          EXXXCUUUSSSEEEEE MEEEEEEEEEEE
          
          AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH... HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
          
          Hum. So, thank you.
          
          Keep reading.
          
          Love you <3

My loves, should I wrote an action scene in the chapter 3 ?

You know, I've been having a crush on König ? Like the fandom got me and I never played cod, but now I'm oddly interessed T T