LEGIONQ8W8

a question for followers

saradautchiha36

Hi 
          
          I'm just asking for your opinion on this one cuz I'm putting lots of efforts on it.
          
          What do you think? Should i continue or stop.
          
          Thank<3
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/355922424?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=saradautchiha36

saradautchiha36

@ saradautchiha36  don't thank me. I had to give a feedback just like you did to me
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LEGIONQ8W8

@ saradautchiha36  Sorry for the late reply 
            Thanks for your feedback, I really appreciate it!
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saradautchiha36

@ saradautchiha36  okay, so let's start with space.
            
            PLEASE PUT AN EMPTY LINE BETWEEN EACH SCENE CUZ IT'S HARD READING.
            
            And i love when there's some comedy scenes it makes me as a reader get comfortable reading.
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