verawritessss

Hi, I noticed you have an interest in my book "Our Life Support." I'm having a bit of writer's block, so if you have any suggestions on what you want to happen next in the book, please let me know! Like, do you think I should continue on with Kai and explore deeper into his family life or focus on the creepy messages and Adelina telling her brothers, or even a family vacation, or them going to Italy?
          Please let me know what will make the story more interesting as a reader.
          
          Thank you xoxo

LInda1587

I am sur you will find a way to make it exciting Gosh I love how the borthers are so intense especially Lorenzo and Dante their will go on hunt and killing spree
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verawritessss

OMG, that's such a good idea, I love that!
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LInda1587

@verawritessss Kai part is good but I would say the creepy stalker part is sooo exciting ,I can already imagine message getting worst and while in family vacation the messages carries on and one of her brothers found out like he find her shaking and pale in her phone  with her phone in hand and take her phone from her hand and find the texts then she start confessing being harassed for  while but hiding it thinking it would stop and did not want worry them blabla
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Rafatwrite

A young girl fall in love with a rude guy. The young guy is also struggling with his own career. She is extremely happy with her family and have an environment of love, on the other hand the guy who is already stressed from his life and also facing problems from his own family he didn't even know that how much depressed he is.
          In the beginning they may face some issues such as bully and their they both meet.
          The twist is that, when they fell in love and it's about their marriage a tragedy came in their life and they fell apart from each other.
          
          READ TO KNOW>
          ●What's wrong with both
          ●What type of issues that they face
          ●What is the tragedy 
          ●Did they meet again
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          https://www.wattpad.com/story/367962671?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Rafatwrite

Elusahsia

@LInda1587 in that case, check out I AM WOMAN and The Mafia Vampire's Daddy Lover. You may not see why I recommend them, but as you read, you will see. I have other mafia-related books or maybe even big brother type books, but they are yet to be released. You can follow, and whenever they are out, I would love to get your thoughts!

Elusahsia

Hey,
          
          May I get a review? I have books of many genres you could choose from. Let me know your preference and if I could send it over. Thanks!

Elusahsia

@LInda1587 check out the Mafia vampire's daddy lover then. I would love your thoughts afterwards. Humazoweva too--for that big brother element.
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LInda1587

@Elusahsia I like big brothers /mafia book  an exemple are book from the whatpadd author  Sophia-aria like the book their Hidden treasure or Let them go .
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