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Thanks so much  

So great job and keep getting better! 

Thanks! It is fun , I just need to find the time to do it more

@demurskies okay cool that’s not that bad I’m new at this so I don’t know how it works can you just edit it or do I need to do anything cause I’m up for any help to make the overall thing better! 

Cool, and i mean that theres not alot of spaces where there should be, and not alot of commas and such, also a few sentences I'd like to tweak, nothing big!

Thank you ! I’m up for any help but what do you mean as in is it too long or ..... just so I know for the future