LONGfry
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I REALLY dislike when stories make or change things for NO REASON, like if the MC is acting OOC for some reason then ATLEAST let it be a smart or a good reason for the MC to be acting up. I get not everyone can write a certain characters way of thinking but the least you can do is give that character the personality you think they have and stick with it. I have that strat with my ao3 fic with law and HOLY SHIT IT WORKS?! or it's just me and everyone ain't a picky fanfic reader, anyway W rant, cheer
