Hi! For one, I am pretty sure you are a bot tasked with advertising a specific story that I will not name here. Which is already as annoying as it can get. But asking others to read your story and give you feedback /that will never even be read by a real person/ is in my opinion the height of disrespect.
To explain more: I read your story as far as I could without having to pay for it and spend a considerable amount of time and effort trying to formulate constructive criticism and hopefully helpful feedback, /like I was asked to by this account/. I got a series of probably standardized answers that made me assume the account holder was simply busy at the moment and still trying to be polite. My last question was answered with an offer for free coins at the website the story was posted on and /nothing else since september 2020/. None of my other questions ever got a reply.
If you are not, in fact, a bot, please reply here in coherent sentences in direct reaction to what I wrote. If not, with all due respect: Whoever wrote your program is bloody annoying.
