LP_Fletcher

Does anyone have 6 minutes to listen to the audio version of chapter 1 of my science fiction book? I would love to know if I am going in the right direction or not.
          	https://www.wattpad.com/774118147-the-orphans-of-sympathy-chapter-1-one-mistake-away

g_elizabeth101

@LP_Fletcher I love it. I really like the descriptive language that you used and the video was really good. Yes I think you are going in the right dirction.
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LP_Fletcher

Does anyone have 6 minutes to listen to the audio version of chapter 1 of my science fiction book? I would love to know if I am going in the right direction or not.
          https://www.wattpad.com/774118147-the-orphans-of-sympathy-chapter-1-one-mistake-away

g_elizabeth101

@LP_Fletcher I love it. I really like the descriptive language that you used and the video was really good. Yes I think you are going in the right dirction.
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