leelacoffee

Hello! How are you? 
          
          I was wondering, cause I am writing a book, if you could maybe check it out 
          
          « Keep your eyes open » its a love-badass-gang story!
          
          I am really proud of the beginning and I feel like I dont have much opinions on it, I would love to know what people thought about it.
          
          Thank you for your time if you actually decide to read it.

LSINGLETA

@LouChkah Hey I read the first five chapter and there needs to be some work done. Plot holes are crucial to NOT have. And at first, Cam is described as the strong, closed off person. But then she's like the peppy, over-emotional, goody two shoes. All of which are not characteristics of a gang leader. I'm not going to lie, I was offended as a girl on how Camilla was portrayed as a leader. She's a leader, not a mother. And a leader doesn't use her body to get help. No man has slept with someone to get help.
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