Dhdjjwjdidi
Hi, sorry if I'm bothering you with anything, I just came here to praise your fanfic. This is one of my favorite RWBY fanfics, since one of my favorite things about this fanfic is that the story is still in season one, but it expands and focuses only on Y/N, since we already know what will happen in the RWBY team's story. One thing I liked is that Y/N kept all his other magic secrets, only revealing the gravity magic, which he lied about saying is his semblance, but all his friends are slowly realizing how powerful Y/N is. I wonder if you will have him reveal all his powers to his friends. Also, something I liked is that when Team RWBY and Team JNPR find out that he cut off one guy's arm and brutally beat another guy, they don't ignore or distance themselves from Y/N; they want to know why he does it. since they know that if he does it, there's a reason, not just because.
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@Dhdjjwjdidi 1. No, (Y/N) said dibs on the magic. But to be more serious, it's more of a situation that his B&S character and him kinda fused together. (Y/N) kept his own appearance but got the specific origins of the B&S character, who is said to be in theory a descendant to the Dalgarians (the old civilisation full of only sorcerers) which made his affinity with magic absurd to the point that he can fully handle high level spells and abilities without any risk. So yeah, just (Y/N) gets magic because the others aren't even compatible to receive it in the first place. Fun fact, in B&S lore, it's said that magic is inherently dangerous and corrupting to the mortal body, to he point that some people burned themselves to death when trying to use fire magic or just straight up lost fingers when trying to use lightning magic. 2. While she might not meet him face to face, she will most certainly hear about him. And she will see an anomaly, something that shouldn't be, someone that is neither linked in any way to her, Ozpin, nor the Maidens and yet still possess magic of unknown origins. A kind of magic that is similar but different that what she is used to in the way that it feels. In other words, Salem would be very cautious of (Y/N) and observe. 3. That, (Y/N) wouldn't say directly, he would play it smart by telling Ozpin that he is suspicious of them. Somethings like "There's no way this team is legit. I mean have you seen that Cinder woman? She has to be almost thirty in appearance, there's no way she's an actual student." or even "Check their records, something's off about them. I'm betting it barely fills the bare minimum. Like do we even know their Semblances? That has to be on record no?" The reason he doesn't directly says "Cinder and her team are actually with Salem and are plotting against Beacon." is that, how do you explain that without either sounding insane or making another bullshit lie?
Dhdjjwjdidi
Okay, thank you. My first question is: will Team RWBY and Team JNPR be able to use magic in the future? 2. When Salem meets Y/N, what will she think of him? 3. When Cinder and her team appear, will Y/N warn Ozpin to keep an eye on them and explain that they are working with Salem and to be careful with Emerald's semblance since she can create illusions and become invisible and undetectable?
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@Dhdjjwjdidi "I just came here to praise your fanfic." Ego boost achieved "I wonder if you will have him reveal all his powers to his friends." There will come a time. But honestly not anytime soon. Also you know what? I'm feeling generous, you get to ask THREE questions about the story.
