MeanMemeWriter

Heyoo, 
          
          I notice you might have a liking in genderbender stories. 
          
          I love the genre! So I am writing a sci-fi action that has genderbending powers as an aspect of the MCs.  
          
          The genderbender aspect is just that. An aspect. But a big slow burning one. In my humble opinion the best gender-bender stories are the ones where the anchor is not forgotten or is pointless as most critics of the genre say. 
          
          What do you think makes a great gender bender? 
          
          
          Two Wolves: Upbeat and Beaten 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/250901310?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=MeanMemeWriter&wp_originator=rfsae9CAu1vh3XWODOaOol1qoUNsoetCOtifEWhUxZaZcNoZVBk7ZLS3N6YCu4xTmf4Mh7NMX%2Blpi5tV3GrBWqrKKjyCmHhMPkSsvjUPSLVh8HenMwW7fL4ZojK2%2B5P0 
          
          *Note it's not a werewolf story*

cmeg4567

I saw that you said you would be interested in some criticism but the only thing id have to say on that front would be on proof reading I guess to correct the few spelling errors made likely while typing quickly. You have a good amount of skill in writing. I really enjoy the falling petals series.

sunnyminute

Hello! I’m sorry to be rude, but I wanted to ask you about how bakugo is depicted in your story, I’ve only made it to the end of “wait wha-” so maybe I’m completely wrong, but he keeps being referred to as Isuzku’s friend, like, “oh my tough friend is at it again” but it’s very obvious that he has hurt her mentally and physically, and told her to kill herself as well, and it really worry’s me that he’s still depicted as a friend. 
          I hope that later on she’ll realise how badly she was treated, and there is absolutely no way it could ever in any way shape or form be ok for him to have asked the way he did. 
          
          Thank you for your time, and I hope that you see this because I really like your story and I hope that this is even a little helpful

LadyGenderbender

So he’s gonna to change a bit in a way that will redeem his character and the two can become friends again. He cares for her in his own twisted way that he will never admit to. On the day he told her to off herself that was the furthest he’s ever gone, he’s a bully but due to their closeness in childhood she can’t see that. She’ll stand up to him eventually and he’ll change
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