LadyTawariel

ughh anyone up to reminding me to write n maybe veta for me?? I have a story that im planning and its huge and ye. reply in private messages anyone who will

daiisygguk

hello! i’m so sorry if this is annoying but it would be greatly appreciated if you read my book “starry night”. i just published it today and i would like to know peoples feedback on it :) 
          https://my.w.tt/FIAhljfEh9 
          thank you!! 

LadyTawariel

@daiisygguk Ooooh it sounds amazing! If you need any advice or a beta or anything, feel free to ask!
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daiisygguk

more of a prologue! as the story continues the chapters get longer, expressing more emotion and description. i don’t wanna spoil too much on the story yet, but thank you so much for your feedback!! :)
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LadyTawariel

@daiisygguk Yeah it's really great! I love how you've kept it very disjointed and jolting to allow for a sense of panic and also sort of weary numbness to flow through it. Is this a short staory and you are going to leave it at that, or are you going to have those chapters as a prologue  to a longer story talking about how it came to happen or how they/she survive after? I am really interested to know!
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