hi synaya! just want to voice out my opinion about your story. it's good actually very light ng kwento at hindi cringey yung ibang scene. pero shempre may dapat i improve and that is yung grammatical errors like yung HER mo nagiging HIS, yung pag construct ng vowels bali-baliktad (yung I nagiging E, yung O nagiging U) may iba pang spelling na mali mali but aside from that maganda yung kwento. yun lang! keep it up hoping ma improve yung mistake^^