Ladynoirfanficreader

Okay. It is 5:37 AM. I haven't slept tonight. I have school today. I felt like inflicting self torture, so I read my old books and... Wow. I thought I was good because of these. Seriously, I thought I was on par with the greats. End of the first series of Minecraft Diaries level stuff.  I am... I have no words. This is the kind of stuff that I comment on. This is the kind of writing that I give writing tips over. I can't... It's so bad. So so bad. 

Ladynoirfanficreader

Okay. It is 5:37 AM. I haven't slept tonight. I have school today. I felt like inflicting self torture, so I read my old books and... Wow. I thought I was good because of these. Seriously, I thought I was on par with the greats. End of the first series of Minecraft Diaries level stuff.  I am... I have no words. This is the kind of stuff that I comment on. This is the kind of writing that I give writing tips over. I can't... It's so bad. So so bad. 

MISTERSTARKS

your icon reminds me of aphmau's superminecraft series,, 

Ladynoirfanficreader

@spiderlingisms That's what it's based on, actually. I made this account and wanted something like girl avengers, and that came up in the Google. I thought it was adorable, and have been using it as my profile pic since then, even though Thor is my least favorite Avenger. 
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DeletedAccount01837

Hey
          Look I spent a lot of time and effort into writing my books I don't appreciate someone commenting that it's cliche when I tried real hard yo be original! So if you don't like my books or think they're 'cliche' don't read them! I'm always open to suggestions and ideas but calling it straight out cliche that's  not okay with me! The msg on my profile is a response to r comment too! 

DeletedAccount01837

Water under the bridge :)
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Ladynoirfanficreader

@florida786 I'm the one that's sorry. I just like harsh critique on my stories and I thought other people would like the same. That was very shallow of me. You have my deepest of apologies.
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StilesIsBaex

Hi I didn't know if I replied to the message right or if it sent through or not so imma just do it here. Her disability is her emotions since she was kinda banished in a way she's willing to be with who ever picks her up, kind of like a lost puppy. In the end it'll be her demise also when she dies she kinda loses her sanity a bit which is typical of you die and ya kno come back to life. And with all the errors I was like 8 when I wrote this well in actuality I was probably 11 and learning English. So really sorry about all the grammar errors and all that jazz! But thank you for reading!

Ladynoirfanficreader

@StilesIsBaex Thanks. The format may have not been the best, but the storyline was good, and so were the characters. I am happy you made it. :)
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StilesIsBaex

No harm done! My previous writing format wasn't the best. 
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Ladynoirfanficreader

@StilesIsBaex Its okey dokey :) I just didn't get that message. It really is very good. I just didn't really get that message. It seemed OP to me. I'm sorry for judging your book before I read it. That was mean of me and I apologize sincerely.
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