Ladynoirfanficreader

Okay. It is 5:37 AM. I haven't slept tonight. I have school today. I felt like inflicting self torture, so I read my old books and... Wow. I thought I was good because of these. Seriously, I thought I was on par with the greats. End of the first series of Minecraft Diaries level stuff.  I am... I have no words. This is the kind of stuff that I comment on. This is the kind of writing that I give writing tips over. I can't... It's so bad. So so bad. 

Ladynoirfanficreader

Okay. It is 5:37 AM. I haven't slept tonight. I have school today. I felt like inflicting self torture, so I read my old books and... Wow. I thought I was good because of these. Seriously, I thought I was on par with the greats. End of the first series of Minecraft Diaries level stuff.  I am... I have no words. This is the kind of stuff that I comment on. This is the kind of writing that I give writing tips over. I can't... It's so bad. So so bad. 

MISTERSTARKS

your icon reminds me of aphmau's superminecraft series,, 

Ladynoirfanficreader

@spiderlingisms That's what it's based on, actually. I made this account and wanted something like girl avengers, and that came up in the Google. I thought it was adorable, and have been using it as my profile pic since then, even though Thor is my least favorite Avenger. 
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StilesIsBaex

Hi I didn't know if I replied to the message right or if it sent through or not so imma just do it here. Her disability is her emotions since she was kinda banished in a way she's willing to be with who ever picks her up, kind of like a lost puppy. In the end it'll be her demise also when she dies she kinda loses her sanity a bit which is typical of you die and ya kno come back to life. And with all the errors I was like 8 when I wrote this well in actuality I was probably 11 and learning English. So really sorry about all the grammar errors and all that jazz! But thank you for reading!

Ladynoirfanficreader

@StilesIsBaex Thanks. The format may have not been the best, but the storyline was good, and so were the characters. I am happy you made it. :)
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StilesIsBaex

No harm done! My previous writing format wasn't the best. 
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Ladynoirfanficreader

@StilesIsBaex Its okey dokey :) I just didn't get that message. It really is very good. I just didn't really get that message. It seemed OP to me. I'm sorry for judging your book before I read it. That was mean of me and I apologize sincerely.
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