I'mma keep this brief: while I do think that Flames of Destiny is a good story, STOP TELLING THE AUTHOR TO UPDATE/FINISH IT. Y'all don't know what LaidEffect's got going on in their life, and constantly telling them to update the story can't be helping anything. I write my own stuff too, and if enough people gave a damn and started telling me to update it over and over, I'd be more than a little annoyed. Leave. The author. Be. Let them update at their own pace.
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